That was the scene last Thursday evening in my work room. I hung a bunch of sheets on the wall and re-drew my entire piece with the help of my lovely wife (who added invaluable suggestions).
I then thumbnailed it out in my sketchbook, then went to Charlotte for help with one final iteration of the thumbnails.
The good news is that I finally feel like I have a piece with enough movement and comedic punch to satisfy me, the bad news is that the following animatic and storyboard pdf are not quite finished (but they do cover about half the piece).
Here is the link to the pdf:
And here is the animatic: